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Thursday, November 7, 2013

HonorCon Day 3 and Beyond

Well, returning to 'real' life . . . ugh. It's a very tough part of the year, full of herding teenagers into painting, wall-papering, stretching fabric flats over wooden frames, carving cliffs, making stone walls out of foam, etc etc etc . . . lots of work.

Anyway, Day 3 . . . I left the lovely La Quinta, tried to find a Dunkin Donuts and abandoned the search as I had a loosely-scheduled meet-up with Gena Robinson, David Weber's PA and Co-Chair of the Convention Council. I missed Gena, unfortunately, as I had horded one last copy of Honor Among Outlaws, hoping to give it to David as a token of thanks for years of entertainment, inspiration, and for making himself so available to us so often.

Missing Gena, I hurried to my next panel, Writing -- Baen Speaks: Writing from a Publishers Point of View. Again, the panelists were Toni Weisskopf, grand-pooba of Baen, Tony Daniel, publisher and author, and Laura Haywood-Cory. Eric Flint sat in again, as he now publishes his own magazine in addition to being a big-wig author. It was another GREAT panel. Seriously, these Baen folks know there stuff, but they also present engagingly with humor and warmth. If you ever have a chance to attend something like the Baen Traveling Roadshow or some other panel, jump at it!
Chuck Gannon, Eric Flint (in motion), and Tony Daniel

My next panel was Writing -- Advancing Plot. Eric Flint, Tony Daniel, and author Chuck Gannon, speaking about things like outlining, flow charts, foreshadowing, etc. Chuck Gannon had a great term that I particularly liked: Pantsing, for writing by the seat of your pants, rather than using an outline. Turns out the professionals, whether they like to or not. have a similar opinion about outlines to mine, ie: they use them.

And that was the end of my panels. I needed to make my flight, return my rental car, etc. So I was unable to stay for the last panel I REALLY wanted to attend: The Trial of David Weber, where a panel of super-fans forced him to account for the many beloved characters he has killed throughout the Honor Harrington series. Now that I know a lot of these folks, I'm sure that was a blast. Maybe not as fun as "Airdropping Several Thousand Angry Treecats on Mesa" . . . but still fun . . .

I did finally track down Gena and David. He seemed genuinely touched when I gave him the copy of my book, and he wrote something VERY kind in my new copy of the Empire from the Ashes, the omnibus containing Mutineer's Moon, the first David Weber book I ever bought, more than 20 years ago . . . That book is currently now one of my prize possessions, and I do not lie . . .

I tracked down Chris, Fred, and several of the other friends I had made over the course of the weekend. I was even asked if I wanted to come back next year as a full-fledged guest writer . . . um . . . hell's yeah! :)

And so, rushed back to the Greenville-Spartanburg 'International' Airport . . . which is where I started the last post . . . so I think that was it!

All in all, this was a great, extremely well-organized convention. Not huge, but then, I would never have wanted something like this to be huge. Each panel audience was about 20 or 30, except for the big events. I was able to sit close to the front each time, and felt like I was really talking with the guests. It was awesome. The venue, the Hyatt-Regency, Greenville, was beautiful and very futuristic, which was a fantastic backdrop to all the uniforms parading around all weekend. And speaking of uniforms, how about a picture of The Royal Manticoran Navy's Bureau of Supply, as a sample?

Anyway, that's about all I have to say about that . . . time to get back to work with my final revision (thanks to a timely delay at the other end) of Abundant Riches, the final book in the Jesse James Archive trilogy.

As always, thanks for reading, and goodnight!

~Craig

Sunday, November 3, 2013

HonorCon Days 2

So, here I sit, in the lovely Greenville-Spartanburg 'International' Airport . . . the nice TSA lady told me there was food on the other side of security, so I moved on through . . . only to discover yet again the wildly divergent definitions many folks can have for 'food' . . . there's a snackbar with a microwave and a toaster oven . . .

Anyway, to the Con!

Saturday was another great day. This Con was very well-organized, with only minor glitches, quickly and seamlessly addressed, occasionally rearing their ugly heads.

I started my day at the seminar by Evergreen Productions on 'Writing for the Transmedia Honorverse' Another well-put together presentation on the concept of creating an entire franchise, ala Star Wars or Star Trek, from the ground up, intentionally. Comics, video games, novel tie-ins, and of course, the movie. I'm very intrigued by the whole idea, and wish them a lot of luck . . . you can tell they know a lot about not only their own fields, but the Honorverse as well, and are passionate about their project.

I then spent a great deal of time in the vendor hall, hanging out with Pat Doyle, a gamer and member of David Weber's BuNine. He was running a Star Trek Attack Wing campaign using the Fleet Captain game as the map and engine. It was ingenious, and reminded me a lot of Russ.

I kept going over to the Ad Astra Games area, looking at the Saganami Tactical Simulator . . . but there is just SO much math involved with that! I couldn't do it, and my brain kept hurting. My fault, not the fault of the game . . . which always had a bunch of people playing it.

I then attended the Baen Traveling Road Show, David Weber addition. This was a fantastic presentation by the publishing team from Baen, led by Toni Weisskopf. She's the head honcho, there, and obviously does not suffer fools gladly, but gives a great presentation, was very funny and personable, and engaging the entire time. The core of the presentation was a slide show of covers, both of David's books through the ages and other authors. It was very cool watching the evolution of the artists and the covers.

After the Road Show, I attended the seminar on World Building, featuring David and other authors. It was one of the best, and easy to relate to as it was constantly tied into the Honor Harrington Franchise. I rounded the day out with Tactics 101 (wow, these guys take their fiction seriously!), and Building a Fictional Navy. This was particularly interesting, because it was being run by naval personnel former and current, and a former professor at the Naval War College. It was really interesting stuff.

I then attended another writing panel, this time on Taking Your Reader for a Ride. This was the first panel I attended with Eric Flint . . . who was AWESOME. Very down to earth and blunt, but also a giant in the field. A lot of practical help for new writers, as well as fun banter, insight, and a couple of behind the curtain stories.

After the last panel of the day was the awards ceremony, where most of the organizers were given plaques (often a surprise, even to the folks organizing the awards), and David was given an admiral's beret in lieu of the full Royal Manticoran Navy  uniform they have commissioned for him. You could tell he was very moved by the gesture. Also receiving awards were the winners of the costume contest, the story telling contest, and the best over-all fan. A story I have to tell later, because it was really cool . . . in a really weird way . . .

After the ceremony I went out to dinner with Listener and Friend of the Show Fred Kiesche and Convention Toastmaster Chris Weuve at the hotel's Roost restaurant . . . delicious. And Fred was gracious enough to treat, and would not take no for an answer.

We ate and chatted late into the night, and I called it a night, returning to my lovely suite at La Quinta, the official hotel of the D6 Generation. :)
And now my flight is boarding, and I have to run!

The last day as soon as I can get to it.

As usual, thanks again for reading!

~Craig

Friday, November 1, 2013

HonorCon, Day 1

So, as I relax in my awesome suite at the Greenville, SC La Quinta (Thanks, Angelo!), I reflect back upon the first day of my first Sci-Fi con . . . and I find that it is good.

The day did not start so well . . . I did not deign to pack the night before, and did not calculate that into my wake-up time, and so was running about 20 minutes late as I tore out the door. I engaged my stopwatch, thinking that I had over-estimated the travel time to the airport, and that would make me feel better . . . except that I was spot on, so no help there. So I walked briskly to the terminal from long-term parking . . . and got there in time to realize that I had forgotten my phone in the car. I RAN back to the parking lot, and then hobbled pathetically back to the terminal (I probably would have been better off walking both ways).  So, panting and sweating like a pig . . . I made it through security only to be stopped at the X-ray machine, where my copy of Firefly The Board Game caused an argument between two TSA agents. One said it was 'only a game', the other said they needed to check. When they saw the box, the woman said "Oh, I know him! He's on Castle! I love Castle!" So they waved me on my way. :)

Because I flew Southwest, I was then last to check in, and thus last on the airplane . . . without checked bags, so a carry on suitcase, for the first time in years . . . tight fit, but I made it.

I arrived in plenty of time at the Greenville/Spartanburg aiprort, and drove swiftly to the Hyatt Regency. The great folks at HonorCon allowed me to have a full 150 person conference room with full technical support for a Q&A on the podcast and Honor Among Outlaws. Sadly, there was no time to do any publicity for it, other than my twitter account . . . and this very kind announcement at registration:
Sadly, I just hung out in the room by myself, and then moved on to the next adventure . . . 

I was then invited to take part in a book signing session . . . except that we were unable to get any of my books to the convention. But the very nice folks from Fiction Addiction offered to sell the two copies that I DID bring , which resulted in this unbelievable moment in my life:

And then inveterate listener and unwitting companion (thanks for the Guinness, Fred!), Fred Kiesche actually BOUGHT one! (And that's Jill, owner of Fiction Addiction and purveyor of very fine books!).
The panel was primarily me and a bunch of very nice folks from BuNine, David Weber's fan-based support committee and the group responsible for the House of Steel Honorverse Companion. They were also the organizers of the Con, and were GREAT to me. Of particularly kind disposition were Bryan Haven and Greg Whitaker. Bryan is the managing partner of  Atlantis Games and Comics. Both guys were WWX backers, and Greg bought my second (and last) book . . . so I sold out, again! :)

Oh, and I adopted one of the last four treecats ever available from the Royal Manticoran Navy Bureau of Supply, and he displayed the novel for me at the signing:
And of course, for the first time I realized that the title of my book might seem a bit strange and misleading in the current venue . . .

After the signing, Fred offered to buy me a Guinness, and my Irish blood would not allow me to say no. So we went to the hotel bar . . . which is AMAZING, and shared a drink and some stories about Raef's randomness and the size of Russ' head.

Then it was off to the Ice Cream Social, where a LOT of RMN costumes were beautifully in evidence, and one uniform from the Manticoran Army.











Then came the Opening Ceremonies, where I actually had a seat reserved for myself . . . and again, my yet-to-be-named treecat posed for a picture.
I nervously anticipated having to introduce myself to the entire hall. I made it, though, and actually got to say "I've been a published author for 11 days", and everyone cheered! It was an amazing feeling.

Each of the people on the opening panel spoke, and David Weber ended the ceremony with a nice speech.
Chris Weuve, former professor at the Naval War College and Toastmaster of the convention, is at the podium, with David Weber to his left.

After the Opening Ceremonies, the big score of the day: Behind the Scenes of the Honor Harrington Franchise . . . where the big plans for the future of the franchise were revealed by David Weber and the folks from Evergreen Studios, including CEO Mike Devlin, Chief Creative Officer Scott Kroopf, Vice President of Gaming and Interactive Richard Browne, Alison Haskovec, VP of Marketing, and Julie Karickhoff, Director of Marketing. I took a ton of pics of the concept work, including the early concept work of the various ships INCLUDING HMS Fearless and PNS Saladin aka Thunder of God, as well as concept art of gravitic wedges, worm holes, and of course treecats . . . and then they told us we couldn't post any pics of the images we saw . . . so you'll have to track me down and ask to see them in person. They even opened a Twitter account JUST for HonorCon . . . which I am not allowed to reveal . . . although if I find out anything cool from it, I'll probably mention it somewhere at some point . . .

We saw the cover of the first graphic novel . . . and I KNOW I'm going to get it as soon as it comes out.

We saw actual game play of the first mobile game, coming out, FREE, in early 2014, and I KNOW I'm going to get that, too. CRAZY cool looking!

And we saw concept artwork of Honor, various settings, and even the Stilties of Basilisk. Some TRULY amazing visuals.

And they talked at length about the various elements of the Honor Harrington full court press, including the abandonment of the On Basilisk Station plot line for the first movie, which will now focus entirely upon the novel Honor of the Queen. On Basilisk Station will provide the bulk of the material for the first series of comics.

Seriously . . . it was an amazing day. And this post took over an hour and a half to write . . . and an 'early night' is now a 'damn, not gonna get much sleep' early morning . . .

So, I'm off. I'll try to post again tomorrow . . . but maybe not quite so long . . .

Hope you enjoyed it, guys!

That's about all I have to say about that, so . . . G'night!

~Craig




Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Time has almost caught us, my friend!

Wow. What a crazy couple of days this has been, tacked onto a crazy month or two into the bargain! Sorry for the delay in posting here again, guys, but I sorely underestimated what a stone-cold beyatch returning to school AND writing the final book in the current Jesse James arc was going to be. Between writing, teaching, play rehearsal, not to mention Karen, Rhys, the podcast, etc etc etc . . . it's been . . . interesting. Ancient Chinese curse-type interesting, but interesting none-the-less.

So . . . where was I? Ah yes . . . I'M A PUBLISHED AUTHOR!!!!! How the HELL did THAT happen? On Tuesday I got my Author's Copies (and I thought getting a single 'Contributor's Copy' of gaming books was cool!), and that was one of the most amazing experiences of my life. I remember seeing countless scenes in movies and tv shows of authors opening up their box of author's copies, and I've always fantasized about what that would be like . . . and it SO lived up to my expectations!

So, the book released yesterday (Tuesday, October 22, 2013), and it was CRAZY fun watching the supply at Amazon dwindle and disappear, resulting in a sold out initial supply in less than 24 hours! I mean, it wasn't a HUGE amount they started with, a test shipment, really . . . but it SOLD OUT! :) And of course, going from 30,020th on Amazon to 9000th in the same timeframe was pretty damned cool as well. I haven't spoken much about it at school, but word got out, and the principal, my friend Brad, sent out an email to the whole district, and now everyone has been congratulating me and wanting to know all the details.

So I guess it REALLY better not suck . . .

And of course, that's where my head is right now. I REALLY hope this book doesn't suck . . .

And of course, Vincent at Winged Hussar Publishing, the hardest working man in the industry, has been bending over backwards getting this book everywhere he can. We went up on Amazon for pre-orders about a month ago, and now, this week, we signed a deal which should see the hardcopies and digital versions available from Barnes and Noble's website, and hopefully, we'll be in their stores with the new year!

And lest I forget, I received the FIRST copy of the Wild West Exodus Rulebook ever to arrive in America! It's even signed and numbered! :) It looks gorgeous, and it is FULL of stories about all the great characters in this wacky new universe that is evolving even as I type! So, having that in my hands was pretty amazing also.

Many folks have been asking about Honor Among Outlaws and Audiobooks, and negotiations are in the works to try to see that done for the new year as well. In the realm of translation, we are in talks with companies in France, Germany, Spain, Italy, and Poland, as well as setting up a distribution partnership with companies in England and Australia . . . although technically Amazon DOES ship that far . . . but this will save folks lots of money, if they want to go in that direction.

As for Abundant Riches, I finished it a couple weeks ago, and am only awaiting the edited notes back from Zmok/Winged Hussar to incorporate those (I make an alarming number of grammatical errors, I have discovered, for an English teacher . . . ), and address all the little notes in my 'Continuity Notebook', and it'll be done-done! As in my last post, I'm still amazed at how many times I have to 'finish' a book before it's really done! They JUST WON'T DIE!!!!!!!

As the exciting news continues to roll in (hmmm . . . not having any books to sell seems to have hurt my standing at Amazon . . . I've fell down to 10,299 . . . oh well), it looks like my next endeavor will be a two-book story arc, again set in the world of Wild West Exodus. I won't say more for now, as we're still in development phase, but I'm excited (once the damned play is over, anyway), to keep this rollercoaster alive!

I think that's about it for now. I'll try to be better about updates here, especially if any more exciting information comes to light. And of course, against my better judgement, I've been Tweeting quite a bit at @d6gcraig

Until then, everyone be well, and thanks for sharing this crazy ride with me!

~Craig

Tuesday, July 30, 2013

This is what Frodo must have felt like . . .

So, the final lap continues to unroll . . . over and over again. Each time you think you've reached the end, and the credits are about to roll . . . another scene!

I've learned so much throughout this process, one important thing I keep telling myself is that, although this first book might just barely make Not Too Horrible . . . I should get better as I go . . . right . . . ? . . . RIGHT??

So, one of the big lessons I learned most recently was to be very careful with the sentiment "I finished my book!" . . . people like wives and mothers will tend to misunderstand this sentiment almost as much as I did . . . Even though I only meant "finished the first draft" . . . it SOUNDS so final! . . . It's not.

One of the many great pieces of advice I've heard over the years, and something I've had to learn from one artistic endeavor to the next, is that any piece of art is never finished, only abandoned. I later learned, of course, that many folks attribute Leonardo Da Vinci with this quote, although Princeton University begs to differ. Anyway, whoever said it first, it's totally true. There is ALWAYS something you want to change, or tweak, or add . . . but you never have all the time in the world, especially if you are working on a deadline for a publisher . . . And so, in effect, what you are getting when you read any book is the high point (one would hope) of the ebb and flow of a writer's efforts, frozen in time.

That was one thing I learned. Another, from author friends I have been lucky enough to find, is that outside of IP fiction (writing for specific worlds/universes/games), this has been a CRAZY short time to write a book! I mean, _I_ thought so . . . but what do I know? In effect, this has been moving so quickly that all the folks that were going to help me by reading my stuff and getting feedback to me have been unable to do so, because I'm cranking out chapters so fast . . . Even the editor for my publisher has been slammed by the avalanche of words . . . not sure if this is a good thing or a bad thing.

Which is something I more experienced than learned from . . . not a lot of learning in this last bit, mostly coping . . . I feel, each time I delve into revision reading, like I'm drowning in my own words. I HOPE there's a coherent story here, but at this point, I literally can't see the forest for the trees. This is why, in the process I've developed, anyway, the outline is absolutely paramount. Because at this point its all I can do to focus on a chapter . . . and I have to trust, if the chapter does what the outline calls for it to do, that the blocks will all fit together in a reader's mind.

And so, as I count down the days to Friday, which is when THIS work of art (if I can use the term liberally), will be frozen in time forever. And at that point it's out of my hands, and then, probably even more harrowing, starts rolling downhill to where readers will eventually catch it, and then it's all theirs. Like it, hate it, find fault with it, accept it . . . my argument is in the words I've already written, so there's nothing more I can do. It's a very nerve-wracking proposition. WAY worse than the most stressful audition I've ever done, actually.

Anyway, back to work. I have just finished combing through the entire book changing every "ok" to an "okay" at the publisher's request. Thank God for the Find feature . . . but unfortunately, you can't just do 'Find and Replace' . . . do you have any idea how many words have the letters 'ok' in them? Well, I do. Roughly 60 per chapter, actually . . .

But that's done, so now I'm free to mow the lawn! Yippee!

Thanks for reading, and on the assumption that someone out there is interested, I'll keep you posted on how the next book goes as well . . . I'm supposed to be working on the outline of that one already, but I don't know how the middle book of the trilogy is going, or what's happening, or where it ends . . . the challenges never cease!

Thanks again, and see you on the other side!

G'night Middle of the Empty Desert!

~Craig

Thursday, May 30, 2013

May You Live in Interesting Times . . .

Listeners of the D6 Generation will by now be aware, I've been working with Romeo Filip, Chad Cooper, and a host of others in the formation of a new game company called Outlaw Miniatures, and on their first game, Wild West Exodus. The Kickstarter was amazingly successful, making over $320,000 with over 1000 backers. The rulebook is nearly done as I write this (over 100,000 words of just fluff when all is said and done), and I've just finished the entire first year of the comic, finally wrestling it into something resembling a coherent traditional story arc. In addition I'm just wrapping up the short story for Extra life featuring Peter West, the winner of the contest, as a Prussian bureaucrat who discovers something sinister afoot on the front lines and rushes into battle to save the day. It's been a LONG time coming, but it's nearly done now, so . . . I'm tempted to gloss over my pathetic timing on this one with the egregious "Better late than never!" But even my hypocrisy does not reach that far. Nevertheless, it IS almost done, so huzzah for that! And of course, there have been several more FFG assignments, including a SUPER exciting introductory assignment for the new Star Wars RPG series!

But as exciting as all of that is, and
 believe me, it's exciting . . . it doesn't scratch the surface for my new news . . . hmmm . . . that was less than elegant . . . Anyway . . . I've signed a multi-book novel deal!

Working with Outlaw Miniatures and Winged Hussar Publishing's fledgling fiction imprint Zmok Books, I have been signed on to write not one but TWO novels set in the Wild West Exodus world, beginning and ending a three book story arc, with Black Library veteran C.L. Werner writing the middle book.

The official announcements recently went out, and Winged Hussar is currently at a massive U.S. tradeshow pitching the series to the major book dealers of North America, to bolster our existing electronic distribution deals. So . . . yeah . . . I know I’ve said this before, many times, but I STILL have trouble believing this is not a dream!

I have wanted to be a writer since I was about 5, when my grandmother helped me put together a little book about a little raincloud that felt unwanted because everyone always wanted it to be sunny . . .  and now here I am!

So, that’s it for now. I’m going to try (I know, I always say that), to pop in here more often as I put my already-sharp nose to the grindstone. TWO novels in FOUR months . . . some say it can’t be done! My contract says it MUST! So, check in, and I’ll try to pop in from time to time to let you know how things are going. This is just the tip of the iceberg of my oh-so-interesting times.

I will leave you with the covers of my two novels (proofs, I might change how my name appears if possible . . . what do you all think? Craig Gallant, or Craig L. Gallant?).

Thanks for sticking with me, and tallyho!

Thursday, May 3, 2012

DUST: Warfare BatRep 1

Hauptmann Rustung scanned the ruins through the mist. Somewhere, lost in the hollow brick shells reaching like skeletal hands into the lowering clouds, a force of Allied Rangers was moving through the contested Icelandic town of Oskjuvatn. Not far off to the west the Hofsjokull Glacier marked the center of a much larger battlefield as the Allies, the Axis, and the SSU all struggled to claim the deposits buried beneath the ice.
But those were concerns being dealt with at a much higher pay grade than a mere Hauptmann. Generalmajor Kreider wanted this push by the Americans blunted, and it was Hauptmann Rustung’s job to see that it was so. The officer replaced his binoculars in their hip case, hands clumsy within their heavy gloves, and activated the small radio built into the gorget of his Schwer-Sturmgrenadier armor.
“Heckenschutze, what do you see?”
Far above, on the fourth floor of a shattered tenement overlooking the town square, the platoon sniper crouched with his spotter, Franz. The Hauptman’s earpiece crackled slightly and then “some vague movements across the way, sir. No clear targets yet, but someone is moving in.”

Blutkreuz Grenadiers and 'Gretchen' hold the flank.

Rustung grunted. His entire Schwere Platoon was established in the buildings along this side of the square, while Leutnant Leiche and his troop of fanatic nihilists were spread out along his left flank, facing the large stone church in the center of town. Rustung could never get used to the pale faces and haunted eyes of the Blutkreuz men, marked by the terrible serum they volunteered to take that might, in the event of their deaths, reanimate them in the service of the Reich. Duty was all well and good . . . but duty was served TO the point of death, was it not? The thought of service beyond that violated everything Rustung was comfortable believing. Of course, belief was easier, with the mewling pack of undead monstrosities that Leiche had brought with him – not to mention the creature with the circular saw . . .
Hauptmann Rustung had also assigned Leutnant Alena Engel and her MPW II-B Ludwig Gretchen to cover the left flank, while the Schwer Laser Grenadiers braced to hunt for any Allied Armor that might make an appearance on the right flank. His platoon was rounded out by Feldwebel Reiniger’s Fliegerfaust squad, and Feldwebel Fleischer’s Schwer Sturmgrenadiers, scanning into the cold morning mist for infantry targets.

Battle lines are drawn.


The battle started, as most do, with a sudden and shocking adrenal rush, surprising no matter how experienced a soldier becomes. One moment there was no visible movement in the ruins across the blasted street, no sound in the dulled, muffled morning air, and then a faint shudder worked through the ground. A staccato series of impacts echoed confusingly through the fog, and the wireless exploded with a frantic report, Heckenschutze’s voice high with surprise.
“Schwer Roboter!”
“Damn,” was all Hauptmann Rustung had time to utter before the entire fourth floor of the tenement holding Heckenschutze’s team detonated in a chalky gray blast wave that rained down across the platoon’s entire front. The lethal snap as the wireless signal cut out told Rustung all he needed to know, but even as he spun forward to call through one of the windows at the Schwer Laser Grenadiers, a further volcanic blast swept through the building, a plume of gray smoke, sand, and bits better left unidentified erupted out of the ground floor windows, including the one Rustung was looking through. Coughing and sputtering, cursing the armored gloves that kept him from wiping the dust and tears from his eyes, he squinted into the drifting dust and a gaping hole in the building’s front. The Hauptmann could just make out the massive shape of an Allied M6 assault walker, its crab-like gait bringing it out of the morning fog like some great sea monster sounding before a helpless ship.

An Army of one . . .

Rustung knew that, with the deaths of his Schwer Laser squad, there was literally nothing left to his entire flank that could so much as scratch the behemoth’s armored hide. Crouching behind the stump of the tenement, he cursed the luck or skill that had erased so much of his offensive capability before he’d even known the enemy was upon him. The thin, attenuated popping of Allied M1 assault rifles rattled off in the fog, as Feldwebel Reiniger’s calm report, “Contact,” buzzed over the wireless.
“Hauptmann, we have movement as well. Advance?” Feldwebel Fleischer’s voice betrayed no tone of eagerness or hesitation.
“Nien. Hold.” Rustung tapped his collar radio control to access the Blutkreuz frequency. “Leutnant Leiche, we’re pinned down here, an M6 opposite. Sweep around the church and apply pressure to their flank.”
The curt response, “Ja, Herr Hauptmann,” was barely audible over the faint hum of static, but as he glanced to the left, Rustung saw Leutnant Leiche’s Sturmpioniere platoon begin to move out of a ruined mansion and off behind the main hall of the large church. Lurching along further down the flank Rustung could see Leiche’s foul creatures. He hoped the grenadiers anchoring the flank were moving as well. The hulk of the walker Greta could just barely be seen among buildings nearly lost in the mist.
A faint roar sounded off behind the crouching gothic building, and Rustung looked up in time to see a small squad of Allied Rangers equipped with rocket packs redeploying away from his left flank. He grinned around his soggy cigar, chewing with anticipation.
Off to the left Greta’s 8.8s barked, their shells’ passage swirling the mist downrange, where some armored Allied target must be hidden by the church. “Leutnant Engel, what is your situation?”
Alliled M2 hull down in a ruined building.
“Here Hauptmann. One M2 hull down at extreme range. Advancing Blutkreuz grenadiers reporting an M1 approaching from behind the church. Sounds like a Blackhawk.” Her response was difficult to understand from the echoing interior of her walker, but he cursed. If it was a Blackhawk, and the pilot got it into range of Greta and unloaded all of its Piat launchers in one salvo . . .
“Leiche, if you encounter an Allied Blackhawk, it must die.” The Blutkreuz grenadiers would be the only units in position to protect his armor from the M1.
“Jawohl, Herr Hauptmann.” Was the only response, but the sudden cough of Panzerfausts and the dull boom of Panzerschreck’s firing immediately after, followed by a dull thud and a rising cloud of burning fuel lighting the left facing of the church tower, told him his order had been followed. “Target neutralized, Herr Hauptmann.”
“Danke, Leiche. Continue your advance.”
Hauptmann Rustung did not hear Leiche’s reply as he was distracted by the growl of the Allied jump troops as they sailed back over the church towards his charging left flank. He began to warn Leutnant Leiche when he was interrupted by the sudden rasp of three Fliegerfausts rattling into the mist. “Nein!” the Hauptmann called out; spinning to glare at his Schwer Flak squad, but it was too late.
Again the paired howitzers of the Allied heavy roared out, and the building holding the flak squad shook under the punishment. Dust and flame washed out from the impact, and when the smoke cleared Rustung ‘s heart gave a start as he saw two of his men signaling to him that they were alright. But then they looked around them in sudden concern, and Rustung saw the still form of Obersoldat Steiner, half buried in pulverized brick, on the floor of the ruined townhouse.
“Arzte!” Rustung turned to his squad medic, “Schnell, schnell!” Ducking from the mere threat of the assault walker stalking the street, Rustung and his command squad made for the rickety protection of the flak squad’s blind.
A victorious shout over the wireless distracted Rustung from his mortal peril, and he hit the wall hard, waving the medic in to see after the fallen trooper while tapping to access the general frequency again. “Report!”
Leutnant Engel’s voice, as if from the belly of an iron beast, echoed back. “Direct hit on Allied M2. Enemy still functional, but he knows he’s been kissed!”
Hauptmann grinned, then barked back, “the Blutkreuz?”
“The Heroes of the Fatherland have swept around the church. Incoming Allied jump rangers were met with massed grenadier fire as they landed, and then overwhelmed by the Heroes.” Rustung chuckled lightly at the new slang term the regular sturmgrenadiers and pilots had started using to refer to the Untertoten of the Blutkreuz. “Several Heroes have died . . . again . . . for the cause, closing with the M2. They disappeared behind the enemy walker’s cover.”
It sounded like things were proceeding according to plan on the left flank, anyway. Now if only he could convince the M6 to head out. The Hauptmann peered out from behind his cover to assess the situation, and could not repress a gasp of surprise as he saw the massive walker slowly backing down its alley and turning towards the left flank, leaving the lightly armored Allied infantry unsupported. Before he could give the order, his well-trained men responded to the changing situation with their own initiative, as re-loaded Fliegerfausts burred out into the hidden Ranger squad directly across the street while another squad, hiding further down, were brought under fire by his emerging recon grenadiers’ MG 44 Zweis.

In the buildings opposite his platoon’s position Allied troopers were struck by the hail of bullets and 20mm rockets, slumping in place or spinning away out of cover to land gracelessly in the dust. Only desultory fire came flashing back, silenced by a second volley from his advancing teams. Rustung looked down to where his medic was still working on the fallen flak trooper. The medic shook his head but continued to work.

Blutkreuz Grenadiers cover the withdrawing flank.

Hauptmann Rustung tapped his wireless for the general frequency. “All squads, fall back. Incoming M6 on your flank. Leutnant Leiche, pull your men and . . . creatures back. We’ve taken our toll. We’ll go back and contact Generalmajor Kreider for reinforcements. There’s no way the Allies can hold Oskjuvatn with what they have left.”
“Jawohl, Herr Hauptmann.”
“Blutkreuz units are pulling back,” Leutnant Engel’s voice was marked with the harsh buzz of a private channel. “That ghost with the buzz saw has been shot half again to death, the rest of his Heroes seem unharmed . . . all things considered. The other Heroes must have been successful, the M2 has not moved for several minutes. A single Untertoten is returning under cover of the Blutkreuz grenadiers.”
A dull explosion sounded from behind the church, a geyser of dirt and dust rising up into the air beyond the retreating flank.
“Never mind. Another Hero of the Fatherland returns to his natural state. The M6 has arrived. Pulling back myself, now.”

The Rangers preside over the smoking wreckage of their survivin command.

“Right flank secure.” Feldwebel Fleischer’s voice was crisp and businesslike. “One runner.”
A coughing startled Hauptmann back to his surroundings and he looked down to see Steiner sitting up, supported by the medic.
He continued on the main frequency. “Exemplary work, troopers. Fall back to rally point Drei in staggered formation. Fleischer to cover the rear as we pull out.”
As the gray ghosts of the Axis forces disappeared into the mists the Allied forces, too thin to advance into hostile territory, pulled back to their own lines to reassess the importance of the small, isolated hamlet.  

Sunday, May 15, 2011

Cold Trail

            The chair scratched softly on the dry wood of the boardwalk as the old man pushed back away from the encroaching sun. Beside him, a younger man grunted in amusement.

            “Every day you set your chair out there, Sam. And everyday you gotta creep backwards inch by inch like the last defense of Atlanta. Why don’t you just set your chair back against the wall with me, and don’t worry ‘bout the sun till you gotta?”

            Sam Mayhew, sheriff of Camino D’oro, grunted back at his deputy. “Back there you can’t see but half the street, Joe, and it’s no good civil servant stands for only seeing half his job.”

            “Average civil servant, more like,” Joseph McBride joked back.

            Mayhew smiled and shook his head at the deputy’s cynicism. “Don’t matter much either way, when you get down to it. The sun’s gonna catch up with both of us in an hour or so.”

            “This time of year, Sam, damned sun catches up with everybody sooner or later.”

            The men sat in the shade, looking up and down the street from time to time. The heat was oppressive, the sun beating down on the overhang above. The buildings on the street, most one or two story, raw wood structures with little architectural difference to set them apart, were quiet and dark. Most folks were either inside trying to stay cool, or up in the hills to the north. Those were the ones with the endless hope of finding their ticket back to civilization in the shallow creeks that bled out into the desert all.

            “So,” Mayhew’s voice was deadpan. “The Dolan Gang.” He leaned over the arm of his chair to spit into the dirt street.

            “Way I figure it, Sam, one less thing for us to worry about.” McBride got up. “One damned big thing,” and he disappeared into the darkness of the sheriff’s office behind them.

            “Well, as a fine example of an upstandin’ civil servant, I won’t complain about someone doin’ my job for me.” Mayhew smiled as he watched a small shoal of dust push its way down the empty street. “But don’t you find the whole thing a bit . . . off-puttin’?”

            McBride came back out onto the boardwalk with a massive knife and long section of branch, a shape vaguely emerging from the raw, carved center at one end.

            “Hmm. Off-puttin’. Someone takes out the worst pack of outlaw back-shooters we’ve had to deal with in a decade, and you find that off-puttin’?”

            “Well, come on, Joe. Ten armed men, some of the most dangerous creatures to darken the territories in a decade, and then without warnin’ or fanfare their bodies show up in the hills outside Placidio, and no one’s takin’ the credit? Someone new is drawin’ some serious firepower, and they’re out there somewhere, and we don’t know anythin’ about ‘em.” The sheriff squinted out into the sunlight. “I’d say that’s off-puttin’, yeah.”

            “Wasn’t firepower did it.” McBride began to apply the large knife to the emerging sculpture.

            “Hmmm?”

            “I heard from ole Clem, down from Placidio, that there weren’t no bullet wounds on any o’ the bodies. He said it was like some wild animal did in every one of ’em.” He took a couple strips of wood off the stick. “Or maybe really sharp blades, like those swords the cavalry officers carried in the war. Remember those?”

            Mayhew’s squint grew deeper. “Yeah, I remember those. I remember how useful they were against armed soldiers, too. You tryin’ to tell me a bunch of sword-toting animals did for the Dolan Gang?”

            “Nope.” Another curl of wood fell to the boardwalk. “Just that it wasn’t firepower.”

            McBride took a moment to absorb that information, and then rested back into his chair again, eyeing the line of the sun as it crept ever-closer. “How’s she comin’?” The sheriff didn’t look back.

            “Oh, slow but sure.” Another curl of wood fell. “You can bet, though, when I’m done, I won’t get half the lip from her that –“

            Joseph McBride was interrupted by the sound of a team of horses approaching down the street. He looked up as the sheriff got to his feet, leaning against the post to get a better look.

            “Good sized wagon. Team of four.” McBride put down the whittling to stand beside his sheriff. The wagon was one of the biggest he’d ever seen. Four massive work horses pulled the thing down the center of the street.

            It looked like a cross between a coach and buckboard, with a passenger compartment up front and a flat cargo space behind. The craftsmanship was excellent; the entire thing shiny black with gold flourishes.

            All of the curtains in the passenger section had been pulled tightly shut; only the driver visible, the shotgun’s seat beside him empty. The driver was a tall man, although sitting on the massive wagon it was hard to tell. He was dressed perhaps a bit more formally than you’d expect of a wagon drover, with black pants and matching coat that must have been blazing hot beneath the punishing sun.

            As the wagon pulled even, McBride and the sheriff got a better view of the cargo deck. There were all sorts of crates and boxes, several bags and tightly rolled items that must have been carpets of some sort, and several covered items that looked like furniture. Sheriff Mayhew’s head tilted to the side as he tried to puzzle out the shapes when he realized that the wagon had come to a stop in front of him.

            “Gentlemen,” The driver tipped his hat to the sheriff and the deputy. “Might you direct us to the best hotel your city’s finest hotel?” His voice had a strange flatness to it, maybe from back east. But it also sounded tired, and Mayhew wondered how long he’d been driving. It was only mid-morning, but the horses seemed fairly blown.

            The sheriff stepped out into the sunshine, looking up from beneath a shielding hand to look at the driver. Mayhew indicated the direction the wagon was already traveling. “Keep going this way ‘till you see Walcott’s Drygoods on your left, turn after that and you’ll see The Gem right in front of you. Best Camino D’oro has to offer.”

            “’Course, you got any ladies with delicate sensibilities in that coach, you might want to keep on going’down two more doors, give ole’ widow Mayfair’s a look see.” Deputy McBride peered shamelessly into the curtained darkness of the coach.

            The driver tipped his hat again. ‘Much obliged, but it’s just us men of the world on this trip” he took in the stars on the men’s vests. “Sheriff, deputy.” He took up his whip and made to crack it over his team when Mayhew stopped him with a raised hand.

            “Where you all from, stranger?” The sheriff’s voice was open and friendly, and his hand never strayed close to the butt of his Colt. McBride, however, eased back against a support post and rested his hand easily on his own gunbelt.

            The driver smiled. “We’ve just come from Placidio, sheriff. Been riding most of the night, though, to avoid unwanted attention from the tribes. We’re all pretty tired. In fact, I think I’m the only one awake, or my principal would be joining in the discussion.” He indicated the passenger section of the wagon with a friendly smile.

            Mayhew frowned a little. “Placidio. Ya’ll heard anything about the Dolan Gang?”

            The pleasant smile never wavered from the driver’s face. “Dolan Gang. Sorry, sheriff, can’t say that I do. We just passed through, didn’t pay much attention to the local goings on.”

            Mayhew nodded to himself and then gave a quick wave of thanks up to the driver. “Well, thanks anyway, Mr . . . . “

            “Reinhart.” He tipped his hat again before settling it firmly over his long dark hair. “Karl Reinhart.”

            “It’s been a pleasure, Mr. Reinhart. You go and get settled in at the Gem. I’m sure you’ll find it has everything you need.”

            Reinhart nodded again and snapped his whip, setting the team to straining at their braces. The massive wagon began to move away down the street, it’s black finish gleaming in the hard sunlight.

            As the wagon turned the corner at Walcott’s the sheriff and the deputy resumed their seats, Mayhew moving his back another couple inches closer to the wall. For a moment they didn’t say anything, just looking out into the bright sun of the street.

            “Principal.” McBride said it with no tone at all as he resumed taking thin strips off the large stick.

            “Fancy. Means employer.” The sheriff continued to stare into the sunlight.

            “Know what it means, Sam. ‘S a funny term out here, though, don’t you think?”

            Mayhew shrugged. “Not as funny as them comin’ through Placidio and not knowin’ anythin’ about the Dolan Gang.”

            “Had the same thought myself.”

            “’Course, all that lacquer and gold leaf, Mr. Principal probably ain’t lackin’ for money, and people in that situation often travel around with their heads in the sand, as often as not. So maybe it’s not quite as strange as all that.”

            McBride stripped another curl of wood away and then held it out at arm’s reach for a new perspective on his work. “What you think they’re doin’ here?”

            The sheriff shrugged. “Who knows. Tourin’ the badlands, showing how brave they are, maybe? Sellin’ some snake oil could be. Did you notice all the fancy trappin’s in the wagon?”

            “Looked like almost enough to set up house.” McBride’s voice was flat.

            “Sure did.” Sam Mayhew nodded to himself. “Now, what you expect a rich-lookin’ guy like that is doin’, movin’ around the territories with a load of furniture?”